Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. Lynn Sr.: He wrecked our trophy case to!? Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . Maybe I should just quit the team. Just a heads up, this ending is going to feature a lot of yelling from the siblings and behavior/actions that some of you may believe that I'm representing the siblings in a bad light. (The employee obliges, and the police arrive to arrest Lincoln, just as the rest of the Louds arrive.). I'm not. "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. ", Lincoln: "I won't deny that I brought this on myself. We really are just a bunch of chickens Lynn: Fine! Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] Hope you enjoy. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. All of a sudden another 6-year old wearing a princess gown snatched the walkie talkie out of Felix's hand and said, "All right lady. I thought you were my family! I need a very big, long rest from them. (They arrive home. Its a stupid mascot costume! It was against the law. You're not even a real family anymore and I HATE that! ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! The worst part is, they had no argument against this. I hate boring science lectures! She opens it, revealing all of the siblings' love interests.] Bobby: Well, I hope her legs are capable of making up for it. turns her attention to Lincoln) "Get out! I already told you, I live here. ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). I cant take a moment more of this! ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? "SAVE IT, RITA!" WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! (Lincoln picks up the remains of the squirrel suit, blows a spiteful raspberry to the family and runs off in fury and sorrow. Lana said, glaring at her parents. "WHENEVER WE VISIT YOU WE ARE MISERABLE!" They are looking very heartbroken.). Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! I have just had it! I-, Lincoln: "LYNN!" Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." (Raises his fist at her). Making the Grade / Vantastic Voyage. ", Lori: (smiles forgivingly) "It's alright, Lincoln. "YOU THINK I ENJOY BEING VISITIED BY YOU LITTLE MONSTERS?! No Such Luck part 2. ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! Lori turned to face him, lowered the window and said, "What?" Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! You overreact to everything! It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. Lincoln: AND I NEVER, EVER WANT TO SEE YOU UNLUCKY PARASITES IN MY LIFE AGAIN!!! Lynn Sr. and Rita were not happy to hear that, but knew that arguing with their kids would be pointless. I don't need you chumps at my stupid games! We got your back. There's no need to shout. tears began to fall out their eyes. I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! Where did you get the gall to talk to us like that!? Lincoln: (tearful) No! After a few seconds, the same pounding noise was heard yet again, this time even louder. Bad luck never happened before when he was there..but he said all we do is just mess things up..we really are the worst family ever Rita: We're sorry kids. I get that i was pretty stupid myself to spread that stupid fib, i should have just opened up! No pun intended. That's not how it works in the hotel. But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" "WE HATE THOSE STUPID CATS OF YOURS!" Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. I do not own Loud House, Spongebob Squarepants, The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron, Wayside or Loud House Tales. When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. "Sure thing," the voice on the other end said. Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. (Tears up) Our only bro. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. They all shouted. Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. "Huh. They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" The siblings began agreeing with that statement, but Lynn Sr. and Rita were frightened. * I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. After she said, water came rushing out of the bathroom, ruining the carpet and drenching their footwear in water. I only own this fanfiction story, which is rated K+, so enjoy. (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. Lincoln: Happy Valentines Day, Ronnie Anne. helluvaboss. Reacting to The Loud House is an ongoing series of The Loud House and The Casagrandes fics written by J Tom (or JTom09) in which many characters from both shows watch episodes of said shows. ), Lincoln: "What am I doing here? (yet another author interruption: I know this sounds harsh, but in all fairness, that is a pretty stupid thing to do and the reason behind it doesn't help). Rita shouted, as she and Lynn Sr. became shocked. That was my favourite bat! Lana: YOU DON'T WANT TO BE OUR BROTHER ANYMORE AND IT'S ALL OUR FAULT!!!! We feel so ashamed!" Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! Post an update . but I just really wanted to get it off my chest. And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! Lisa: I have truly disgraced the scientific community Lola: Does this mean Linky doesn't love us anymore? Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). She also knew it wasn't about Jeffrey, the manager, because any reviews he gave to staff were done over a month ago. i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. The sound of typing on a computer was heard for a few minutes. Lincoln: Alright then, call them. Ruth said, curious to where this was going. I don't even care about that anymore. With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. Except for Lynn). He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. Especially Miss. Also yes, this story takes place in season 5. No Such Luck, No Such Love is a The Loud House fanfic written by SpartanXHunterX which can be read here. Lincoln: No! Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. One of the Boys alt ending4. You kicked me out of your lives, now I'm kicking you all out of mine!! None of the kids wanted to talk to their parents and the parents didn't know what to say to their kids. Rita asked. "Uh, sweetie," her dad said, in a nervous tone, "Think you and Luna can get out of the front seats, so I can drive us home." "Kids," Lynn Sr. got up from his seat, not realizing how angry the kids were, "What are you doing here? Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! Lynn: FINE! Morag: well, if you insist I suppose. "What," Felix said, "what is it?" Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. Whats next? (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! Why do these three buffoons have the room. *, Lincoln: It's not fair. N Eddy's big picture show . My family learned not to let something as stupid as superstitions get to them and tear us apart, and I learned to just be honest about things like this instead of convincing them about something ridiculous just take a break from going to certain events. Share your thoughts, experiences and the tales behind the art. by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. I'll admit, it was stupid and wrong of me to lie to them and take advantage of it, and I probably should've just told them that I just wanted some me time, but honestly, I think this is way more than I deserve. They wanted to comfort him, but they both knew that he would push them away. Lincoln is running through town, sweating, panting, tearful and very thirsty. You're supposed to be grounded to the hotel room, remember?" 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' Lynn Sr.: NO! "Is that so?" "Wait, what are you saying?" Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. Lynn Sr.: Come on, let's go find Lincoln! I ADMIT IT!!! Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place. If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. Tell the community what's on your mind. YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! Luna: I can't believe we made him feel as if we can't feel anymore or that we don't love and care for him. Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. You're all delusional and irresponsible all the time and I HATE that! (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. Her son said, "You and dad told us to behave ourselves and grounded us when we didn't, which we understand, but the fact that you said all that and decided your own advice was pointless! Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. Lola: Me too! ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. Everyone heads to Vanzilla, but Lincoln still stays in place). ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? Lucy: Lincoln's right! And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! I do not own The Loud House, it belongs to Nickelodeon Animation, created by Chris Savino. I hate presentations! ", Lincoln: (To his all sisters) "All thoseevents I attended, was I bad luck? This proves it. "Which room number is it?" You just mess up everything! [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. ", [Later, they arrive back in their house.]. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." Kick the . He flies over to her and onto her hand.) No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. After she did, Leni didn't get angry, but she did get upset, very upset at her parents. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. You never let me have a say in the matter! I hate golf! I hate pageants! ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! The Loud siblings appeared in the lobby, completely red in the face, as angry as a bull seeing red and they looked ready to destroy everything in their path. I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? Lincoln asked, as he started crying yet had an angry look on his face, "What's really lousy is that you guys had the nerve to make us feel guilty for the stuff we did when the reason we got kicked out of the hotel was because you two decided to act like irresponsible teenagers and go for a late night swim in the pool without any swimwear on!" I tried to make it as comical as i could. Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. He even throws many of his family's items out the windows, such as Luna's guitar, Luan's comedy props, Lisa's science set, Lori's phone, Leni's sewing machine and dresses, Rita's typing machine, Lynn Sr's cowbell, Lana's animal shelters, Lola's cosmetics and tiaras, Lucy's poetry book and coffin, the TV and most of Lynn's sports equipment. No Such Luck / Frog Wild. She said, in an angry tone, before blowing a raspberry her parents, covering them in her spit. Later, in jail). Lincoln: So where did this looney belief that i was bad luck suddenly come from, huh!? Why did you kick me out of the house? Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. Lucy shouted, "WE DREAD GOING TO VISIT YOU AND DREAD LOOKING AT YOUR GROSS FACE!" ", Lincoln: "Well Luna, we all make mistakes. I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! My coffin. So expect a bill in the mail." Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." Eventually, Rita broke the long silence, saying, "Kids, I know you're angry at us for causing us to be kicked out of the hotel. They felt nothing but guilt and shamein their hearts, even the goth child who claims to not have one. Hmm. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. +7 more. Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. What do you think, Pep? They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. One of his friends added, "We're not messing with you. ", Lynn: "We forgot to lock the windows! We are no longer grounded to the room. The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. Rita: Kids, your friends are here. "Yeah, I guess that's fair," Luna said, "we made a promise with you and we couldn't keep it." Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! This time, it's the infamous "No Such Luck". loud. I even threatened you to go to my game! Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! Lincoln: If they're so nuts, I can't be near my family. He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. it shows how badly Lincoln was treated by his family. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. Lisa: *Gasp* It's official! Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. Lori: (sighs) Maybe we did go a little too far with these crazy superstitions. "You guys are literally going up the room right now and getting our stuff now!" Lynn: Well, its because of that costume that i won my last game! Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. Can you please just come down here? Rita: Sweetie, please! (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] Journal. Ronnie Anne: Happy Valentines Day, Lincoln. ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. What kind of parents would do that? YOU HATE US!!! I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. The minute after those words left Luna's lips, the security officer leaned his face in front of Luna's and responded with, "You can help me by letting me into your room. (sniffles) I'd better make a home fast. I loved winning so much that didn't take my failure like a good sport, and started thiswhole bycalling you bad luck. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. There must something we could do to put a proper spotlight on our dear duke. He staggers inside, weak and collapsed. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . [takes the mask off]"I was here the whole time! "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." While eating breakfast, Lincoln learns from his sisters that they have planned activities later in the day. I guess this proves it! (The other sisters come over onto the main couch. Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. Lincoln: (marches up to Lynn) Straight from you, you big bully! No more Loud Family? I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. (Lynn looks confused.) (Lincoln picks up the head and jumps up and down on it several times.). (With his remaining strength, he scrambles over to the house. Even more computer typing was heard but soon afterward the woman on the other going, "Hhhmmmm.," was also heard. They knew their kids wouldn't like that but this was supposed to be a weekend for themselves, not the family, and the kids should've just accepted it and gone to Ruth's. Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. There is the occasional food break, of course, where the reactors recount what they learned. House of Lies alt ending14. NOBODY!!! I kinda have mixed feelings on this alternate ending, though Im leaning more on the approval side. Fool Me Twice extended ending10. You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! What seems to be the problem?" As they leave, Jeffrey grabs Lynn Sr.'s arm, making him and his wife turn to him, he added, "And just so you know, your kids tore apart my lobby and the room you were staying in. "Sigh. You all are really, really bad luck! Uh-uh, I'm nothaving it. ", Luna: (opens her arms out) "Come here, bro." Rita: WE ARE THE MOST DISGRACEFUL PEOPLE EVER!!! We don't need to get violent here. Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. "I know you're headstrong sometimes, but I know that deep down in your heart, you love me. Rita: Sweetie, calm down. It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! (charges towards Lynn in a rage) AND I HATE YOU!!!! ", Lincoln: "Because your my sister." Nobody wanted to answer, but they knew things would get uglier if they didn't, so, Luna made the decision to walk slowly to the door and open it just enough to see who's out there but not to let them in. Lola finished with. Lincoln: Youre too stubborn to admit youre wrong, you never admit you mess up, your as gross as you are lousy and you never learn anything! Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. But the woman did, "That your parents were caught skinny dipping after hours? What the guy said also got the officer's attention, not just because this guy just informed him of somebody who was working here without being officially employed but also how they were just given the ok to enter a room that was clearly occupied. "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." Leni: (sniffles) I miss him so bad. Morag: is it now? Completed Just because of superstitions?! The school bell rings at Royal Woods Middle School. (cries). Those words just made Lynn Sr. and Rita feel even more lousy and know for certain that they messed up big time. This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. He helped hold us all together and outings just won't be the same without Lincoln. Goodbye for now. Ever again. Needless to say, they were not pleased. "Lynn? Lynn Sr.: But son..if you wanted time off, all you had to do was just say so! We just thought you were bad luck, we didnt mean to upset you like this. Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? This response shocked Lynn Sr. and Rita, Aunt Ruth was someone they could rely in case they went out of town and couldn't trust their kids to be home alone, hearing her say she doesn't want them anywhere near her home made them very worried. This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. We need it! BECAUSE I DON'T WANT YOU LITTLE DEMONS ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN!" You're scaring even me. See if I care! Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. Luna: [Blushes] Really? "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. Youre our brother! I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! Lucy: (shedding tears) Me too. ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. the family opens the door to see a ticked off Lincoln. Start talking. She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. "I can't believe you kids just did that," Rita said, tears running down her face like a river. She knew it didn't mean the weather, it was going to be bright and sunny all day. If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us." ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! As long as I know that it'strue, I wouldn't let this stop me from loving you, or anyone else. When Vanzilla pulled into the Loud Family driveway, Lori turned to her parents and said, "We're going to take our luggage up to our rooms. Baby Steps / Brawl in the Family. Lynn: (clenches her fists) Say That Again.. Lincoln: No. I hate it that you don't have any feelings or care anymore! Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. (he goes to the living room window. Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. The fact that you locked me out of my own home all because of superstitions ithurt, it really hurt it felt like a jab inmy heart." Did anything life threatening happen? Lincoln: "Coming!" "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. Rita got up from her seat and said, "Kids, let me explain" "Explain what?!" Lynn added. Status Update. You try dancing in this heat! Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. SO I DEMAND AN EXPLANATION!" "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. Lori yelled. Rita: Lincoln?! Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room.
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